Love or Lust

July 26, 2012
By awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Akthough the truth may hurt, not knowing is the worst kind of punishment.


When im with you i want to stay by your side forever.
When i kiss you i never want to stop.
When we hug i waant to stay in your arms forever.
When I see youu my eyes show a spark.
You say you love me yet we arn't together.
You say you cant live without me yet you dont make it official.
I know i love you.
You make me feel beautiful.
wanted.
something.
But is it love or Lust.?

Is it the awesome dizziness love alolows us to bask in.?
The beauty at which it blinds us from evil.?
Or maybe the shades of pink and red that cloud your mind.
Or is it the passion and hunger lust clouds you with.?
Is it the thing that causes a sensationn throughout all of your nerves.
The inly thing that can truly fake as love although it is nowhere near.?
Love or Lust.?



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on Aug. 31 2012 at 11:42 pm
ScarlettRose390 PLATINUM, Hawthorne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible, only unbelievable."
"Gotta keep doing it if I want to get better. Gotta stop doing it if I want to ger worse. Gotta do it sometimes if I want to stay the same."

*errors. Oh, irony.

on Aug. 31 2012 at 11:41 pm
ScarlettRose390 PLATINUM, Hawthorne, New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible, only unbelievable."
"Gotta keep doing it if I want to get better. Gotta stop doing it if I want to ger worse. Gotta do it sometimes if I want to stay the same."

Aside from a few spelling or grammar erros this was solid.

on Aug. 11 2012 at 10:58 pm
MinaDeOro SILVER, Bell Gardens, California
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Favorite Quote:
"My best friend gave me the best advice. He said, "Each day's a gift and not a given right. Leave no stone upturned. Leave your fears behind and try to take the path less traveled by. That first step you take is the longest stride"

its all so true. great poem. it made me think is it love or lust?


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