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Love or Lust

When im with you i want to stay by your side forever.
When i kiss you i never want to stop.
When we hug i waant to stay in your arms forever.
When I see youu my eyes show a spark.
You say you love me yet we arn't together.
You say you cant live without me yet you dont make it official.
I know i love you.
You make me feel beautiful.
wanted.
something.
But is it love or Lust.?

Is it the awesome dizziness love alolows us to bask in.?
The beauty at which it blinds us from evil.?
Or maybe the shades of pink and red that cloud your mind.
Or is it the passion and hunger lust clouds you with.?
Is it the thing that causes a sensationn throughout all of your nerves.
The inly thing that can truly fake as love although it is nowhere near.?
Love or Lust.?



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ScarlettRose390This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 31, 2012 at 11:41 pm:
Aside from a few spelling or grammar erros this was solid.
 
ScarlettRose390This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 31, 2012 at 11:42 pm :
*errors. Oh, irony.
 
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MinaDeOro said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 10:58 pm:
its all so true. great poem. it made me think is it love or lust?
 
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