Losing faith

July 26, 2012
By awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Akthough the truth may hurt, not knowing is the worst kind of punishment.


Brought up hearing"god this" and "god that"

being told what to beiieve in
Then "god" took away the only thing i cared about.
Everyday shedding tears wondering why.
I couoldnt help but cry my eyes out screaming why why and why.
I was told he took the bad.
Then why her.?
She was good.
pure.
happy.
internally beautiful.
but he didnt care.
he wanted her.
and he took her.
snatched her from my life,
watched me break
cry.
become lost.
Now i cant help it.
Cant help but lose faith.....



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on Aug. 29 2012 at 8:40 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

Wow I like this a lot. I think everyone can relate somewhat to it. Every once and a while there's something in our lives that causes us to ask the question, "why?" Very relatable and I love the word choice. Good job

on Aug. 11 2012 at 10:56 pm
MinaDeOro SILVER, Bell Gardens, California
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Favorite Quote:
"My best friend gave me the best advice. He said, "Each day's a gift and not a given right. Leave no stone upturned. Leave your fears behind and try to take the path less traveled by. That first step you take is the longest stride"

very good. it makes me feel like i can relate... and don't lose hope :]




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