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Broken Angel

July 21, 2012
By DeadlyPurpleBunny SILVER, El Cajon, California
DeadlyPurpleBunny SILVER, El Cajon, California
6 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Intelligence without ambition is like a bird without wings - Salvador Dali

If music be the food of play on!- Shakespeare

The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb - Unknown


We watch her fall
Icy wings turn black
He was there when she landed
Only he can send her back
She must escape the pain
But only he can end it
He holds the power
But he knows this not
She cannot wait
The loss is too great
And as she fades
She leaves her trace
Upon his heart and upon his mind
She is forever lost in time
So now he cries
Longing for her
He pleads to dark skies
But she now is gone
He’s set her free
Not knowing how great the price would be
But now that she’s gone
He cannot see her face
Her loss hurts like fire in his skin
And now darkness may creep within
Poison killing the good inside of him
But he moves on and lives right
He fights for his soul and his life
He loves her although she is gone
Because he will see her later on
He was there when she fell
And now as she ascends to heaven he wishes her well


The author's comments:
This was for extra credit in English and I just really like how it turned out. It's not meant to be religious and the girl isn't really an angel. It's a metaphor

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on Sep. 4 2012 at 1:07 pm
DeadlyPurpleBunny SILVER, El Cajon, California
6 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Intelligence without ambition is like a bird without wings - Salvador Dali

If music be the food of play on!- Shakespeare

The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb - Unknown

Thanks so much!

on Aug. 23 2012 at 12:12 pm
loveisntreal GOLD, Arcata, California
19 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you live what you've learned." -linkin park

you are an awesome writer!! please keep writing, i love your style and topics. it was sad, but also inspiring. :)

on Jul. 26 2012 at 5:05 pm
DeadlyPurpleBunny SILVER, El Cajon, California
6 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Intelligence without ambition is like a bird without wings - Salvador Dali

If music be the food of play on!- Shakespeare

The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb - Unknown

Thank you! :D

on Jul. 26 2012 at 2:12 am
Blue..Skies.. SILVER, Lynnwood, Washington
5 articles 10 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You were born an original, don't die a copy."

"The best curve on your body is your smile." :)

I liked it! You had a good choice of words, it was sad yet lovely. I hope you continue to write more because you have the talent.