True Meaning of Love

July 21, 2012
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You make me feel beautiful
Just by the way you look at me.
I will never forget this day that makes me so alive when I’m around you.
I wish, I pray that this day will never end.
But right now, I’m going to stay in the moment with you.
Looking into your chocolate brown eyes, hear your funny jokes, and your beautiful smile.
Now I know the meaning of love
How your breath catch when someone kisses you
Your heart swells when he holds your hand.
Brings such peace and joy
Promises he makes and would keep.
I will always cherish this day for the rest of my life
This is the true meaning of undying love





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jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 5:13 pm
I love your writing. It's beautiful. Be careful thought; you switiched POV. For example, at the beginning, it was second person (using "you" a lot), and towards the end it switched to third person. Just a helpful tip. (: Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!
 
jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 5:14 pm
*though **switched
 
DanielM said...
Aug. 7, 2012 at 6:11 pm
Awesome poem. I really like the emotions and I also like the line your heart swells when he holds.your hand great imagery.
 
MidnightBlue18 replied...
Aug. 7, 2012 at 6:49 pm
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!!
 
Silver2black said...
Jul. 28, 2012 at 9:27 am
lol, Sweet chocolate poem ^ ^ Nicely written.
 
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