True Meaning of Love

July 21, 2012
By MidnightBlue18 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
MidnightBlue18 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Dont mistake kindness for weakness.


You make me feel beautiful
Just by the way you look at me.
I will never forget this day that makes me so alive when I’m around you.
I wish, I pray that this day will never end.
But right now, I’m going to stay in the moment with you.
Looking into your chocolate brown eyes, hear your funny jokes, and your beautiful smile.
Now I know the meaning of love
How your breath catch when someone kisses you
Your heart swells when he holds your hand.
Brings such peace and joy
Promises he makes and would keep.
I will always cherish this day for the rest of my life
This is the true meaning of undying love


The author's comments:
When I wrote this poem, I realized that love is powerful, even through good times and bad. And I wish that everyone can find true love. I hope you like it!!

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on Nov. 3 2012 at 5:14 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

*though **switched

on Nov. 3 2012 at 5:13 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 861 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I love your writing. It's beautiful. Be careful thought; you switiched POV. For example, at the beginning, it was second person (using "you" a lot), and towards the end it switched to third person. Just a helpful tip. (: Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!

on Aug. 7 2012 at 6:49 pm
MidnightBlue18 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont mistake kindness for weakness.

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!!

DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 7 2012 at 6:11 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Awesome poem. I really like the emotions and I also like the line your heart swells when he holds.your hand great imagery.

.king. SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2012 at 9:27 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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lol, Sweet chocolate poem ^ ^ Nicely written.


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