If time melted away

July 20, 2012
By MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
7 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything is okay in the end,
if its not okay it's not the end."
"Be who you are and say how you feel because if someone matters they dont mind and if someone minds they dont matter"
"If God brings you to it he will bring you through it!"


Time
So slow yet so fast,
Always passing us by
Minutes, hours, and days
Where does it go all that wasted time?
What would happen if it all stopped,
And disappeared all together?
If time melted away
Would you do everything at once
Or nothing at all?
Would you be frozen where you were
Unable to move or change
Or would everything around you seem to be still,
Peace and quiet?
Could you pick one thing and do it forever,
Or would you be stuck in the same task
For the rest of your life?
Would you live forever if years don’t exist
always stuck being 16 or 60?
Would it be a good thing?
The absence of time is so unfathomable
Is that because it can’t be possible,
Or is it because we don’t have a greater understanding?
Of what it would be like if time melted away.


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. said...
on Oct. 6 2012 at 8:15 pm
^That's me. Mind checking out my work?:)

on Jul. 29 2012 at 3:04 pm
MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
7 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything is okay in the end,
if its not okay it's not the end."
"Be who you are and say how you feel because if someone matters they dont mind and if someone minds they dont matter"
"If God brings you to it he will bring you through it!"

Thanks! I will check out some of your stuff.

so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 11:14 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Wow. I love this. It sure makes you think.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


on Jul. 23 2012 at 4:49 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 187 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

this poem makes me think . . . so now im confused, But im sure about one thing ,. . . This poem is GREAT :) (maybe check out my stuff  some time)


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