Love.

July 8, 2012
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi


The mystery of the lonely thoughts run through his endless world, being unfolded, strumming through a secret simple embrace. Its unending wave of emotion topples every thing in it path, because nothing can beat the tsunami of emotion that is rampaging his world. For what he is feeling is greater than I. He is feeling the only thing you need. Love.


The author's comments:
I wrote this a while ago.

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on Jul. 23 2012 at 3:18 pm
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE, Darwin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You can either be a cop or a criminal, but when you're facing a loaded gun what's the difference?"

your words are simple yet powerful. you got great talent nak. keep the good work going :) :)

on Jul. 22 2012 at 8:47 pm
WretchedCorpse SILVER, Belvidere, New Jersey
6 articles 9 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You will be the happiest of women. And we shall sing, all by ourselves, til we swoon with delight! You're crying! You're afraid of me! And yet I am not really wicked. Love me and you shall see! All I wanted was to be loved for myself."

Awesome poem.

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 12:33 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I like the first line. Its really good. I like your beginning stanza. Great job! Suggestion: why did you write on love? Just curious.


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