July 17, 2012
Oh when shall You come,
To take away the strife,
Of everyday life,
Which causes great despair,
We are awaiting for You to come,
But it has been so long!
How long shall we wait!
Our enemies forsake us!
We are moaning in sorrow!
We need our Savior to come back!
For without Him,
ALL is lost,
For without Him,
there is great despair.
- Inspired by Psalm 6

Psalm 6 NIV
O Lord, do not rebuke me in your anger,
or discipline me in your wrath.
Be merciful to me, Lord, for I am faint.
O Lord, heal me, for my bones are in agony.
My soul is in anguish.
How long, O Lord, how long?
Turn, O Lord, and deliver me;
save me because of your unfailing love.
No on can remember you when he is dead.
Who praises you in the grave?
I am worn out from groaning;
All night long I flood my bed with weeping and drench my couch with tears.
My eyes grow weak with sorrow;
they fail because of all my foes.
Away from me, all you who do evil,
for the Lord has heard my weeping.
The Lord has heard my cry for mercy;
the Lord accepts my prayer.
All my enemies will be ashamed and dismayed;
they will turn back in sudden disgrace.

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Ruby-Paige-Rose said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 12:56 pm
I love that you write about God in such a posative light.
Hannabug replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 12:58 pm
Well I try to....the world is so negative i figure why add to it :) 
chefgirl said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 9:12 pm
I love it! This is like da best. Maybe because it's Bible inspired and the religion is like my life but I love it. This is a PTL poem (praise the Lord) :)
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 9:14 pm
Thankyou!! most of my poems are inspired by Bible verses... Its the only thing I can write about :D
DanielM said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 12:42 pm
Hannabug..... I really like how you can put in the Bible in your work. I admire that! Now I really like this poem cause it has a good message. It shows how waiting is good. Pslams 6 is a good psalm. Great Job!!!!! Suggestion: why did you write a poem based off a Bible verse. Just curious
Hannabug replied...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 7:31 pm
I like to write Bible inspired poems because well... The verses inspire me!  Lol idk I can't really write poems too good other then ones like this... Either that or they are about my emotions 
Johnny99 said...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 7:26 pm
Very well written. Keep on writing about what you believe, it'll get you far.
Hannabug replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 7:28 pm
I hope someday I will get published in the magazine so more people will see these....
Johnny99 replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 7:36 pm
I'll root for you.
Hannabug replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 7:40 pm
Thanks! :D
TraceS. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 1:12 am
Not going to lie, you should really expand on these. After reading 3 of your poems, I can tell you are probably very devout, and base your work on the Bible. The only thing you need to do is expand on them, and you'll be good.
Hannabug replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 1:15 am
Well idk if I am devout... How can I explain this... I'm not devout in like the "strict" kinda way(atleast I hope not)... I am more spiritual and I look at it as like a relationship and not a religion.... 
caitiekate said...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 1:16 pm
even though I don't beleive in God...this was a very good poem...i like this style and i think you worked with it well!! great job and vocabulary too!!
Hannabug replied...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 1:17 pm
Thankyou!! If you are ever interested in learning about God you can comment on one of my poems and I will talk w/ you!! :D 
zoeisdyingtolive said...
Jul. 24, 2012 at 7:47 pm
omg this is really good. <3
Hannabug replied...
Jul. 24, 2012 at 7:49 pm
:D thankyou! 
Triumph said...
Jul. 24, 2012 at 7:45 pm
Great bible usage! Keep writing, mate :)
Hannabug replied...
Jul. 24, 2012 at 7:49 pm
U too!!!!!
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