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The land of the forbidden
the trees were gnarled
the ground is charred
there are no animals
in the land of the forbidden
the air is foul
the buildings are crushed
the sun never rises
in the land of the forbidden
the people are enslaved
there is no sound
there is no love
in the land of the forbidden





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TraceS. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 6:59 pm
I think this is rather unique, but it is defintely far too short. An extended version, perhaps?
 
Catfan296 said...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 2:42 pm
Your poem contains vivid imagery.
 
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