July 14, 2012
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always tell you that

things are fine.

That amongst all the

craziness I

somehow happy.

Your constant complaints,

criticisms, and

naggings do

affect me.

Every time you

question I tell

you that I am

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albinotiger said...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 8:57 am
I dont know how to desribe it but the way that the words are spoken sound really  . . . smooth? well something like that! you did a great job and thats what matters (maybe check out my stuff somtime)
Johnny99 replied...
Jul. 17, 2012 at 6:50 pm
I believe the word you are looking for is fluid. They flow together. A great poem.
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