July 14, 2012
By zombiepanda5 BRONZE, Cold Spring, Minnesota
zombiepanda5 BRONZE, Cold Spring, Minnesota
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always tell you that

things are fine.

That amongst all the

craziness I

somehow happy.

Your constant complaints,

criticisms, and

naggings do

affect me.

Every time you

question I tell

you that I am

The author's comments:
This was a piece I wrote for school--the assignment was to play with the white space. So it was meant to be read all the way through, but also just the first column could be read on its own.

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Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2012 at 6:50 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
A rose and a flame, are just the same.

I believe the word you are looking for is fluid. They flow together. A great poem.

on Jul. 17 2012 at 8:57 am
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

I dont know how to desribe it but the way that the words are spoken sound really  . . . smooth? well something like that! you did a great job and thats what matters (maybe check out my stuff somtime)


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