Concrete Bed

July 14, 2012
By mmk96 BRONZE, White Lake, Michigan
mmk96 BRONZE, White Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"This is only a minor setback to a major comeback"

Lying on the concrete bed, with story's to tell and words still unsaid. Shame in my head for getting me here, guilt for the night that flashed me almost dead.

Lying alone in the concrete bed, wishing for another chance to turn me good again. What more is there to say, it will all go away hopefully some day, but now i will turn over to the other side and sleep away on the concrete bed.

The author's comments:
A piece of my past

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on Jul. 16 2012 at 5:36 pm
bethanyvreeve SILVER, Nanuet, New York
7 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have a voice too and for better or for worse, mine is a voice that cannot be silenced.

I love the repetition of 'concrete bed'. A well written poem. I enjoyed it!


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