Death

July 13, 2012
By MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
7 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything is okay in the end,
if its not okay it's not the end."
"Be who you are and say how you feel because if someone matters they dont mind and if someone minds they dont matter"
"If God brings you to it he will bring you through it!"


They say "I'm praying for you" or "I feel sorry"
But I don't want their pity
They pat my back and try to help
But they just can't understand
They make my meals and clean my home
But I just want to be left alone
They want to help and I wish they could
But they don't get my life
They try and try
But she still died and there is nothing they can do.



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on Apr. 4 2014 at 4:28 am
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
30 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live

This is so alive! Very well done!

on Nov. 19 2012 at 1:45 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

I love how you make your comments ever present during you poems! Keep it up your amazing!

on Jul. 21 2012 at 5:41 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

As said before, the emotions are really powerful. very well done!

on Jul. 21 2012 at 2:02 pm
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE, Darwin, Other
1 article 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can either be a cop or a criminal, but when you're facing a loaded gun what's the difference?"

its awesome. emotions are powerful indeed :)

on Jul. 20 2012 at 7:02 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 187 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

really powerful with raw emotion!! great work!! :)

 



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