July 13, 2012
They say "I'm praying for you" or "I feel sorry"
But I don't want their pity
They pat my back and try to help
But they just can't understand
They make my meals and clean my home
But I just want to be left alone
They want to help and I wish they could
But they don't get my life
They try and try
But she still died and there is nothing they can do.

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WickedDreamer said...
Apr. 4, 2014 at 4:28 am
This is so alive! Very well done!
AlaskanGirl15 said...
Nov. 19, 2012 at 1:45 am
I love how you make your comments ever present during you poems! Keep it up your amazing!
Writer_Jordan said...
Jul. 21, 2012 at 5:41 pm
As said before, the emotions are really powerful. very well done!
alex27 said...
Jul. 21, 2012 at 2:02 pm
its awesome. emotions are powerful indeed :)
albinotiger said...
Jul. 20, 2012 at 7:02 pm

really powerful with raw emotion!! great work!! :)


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