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Death

They say "I'm praying for you" or "I feel sorry"
But I don't want their pity
They pat my back and try to help
But they just can't understand
They make my meals and clean my home
But I just want to be left alone
They want to help and I wish they could
But they don't get my life
They try and try
But she still died and there is nothing they can do.




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WickedDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4 at 4:28 am:
This is so alive! Very well done!
 
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AlaskanGirl15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 19, 2012 at 1:45 am:
I love how you make your comments ever present during you poems! Keep it up your amazing!
 
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Writer_Jordan said...
Jul. 21, 2012 at 5:41 pm:
As said before, the emotions are really powerful. very well done!
 
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alex27 said...
Jul. 21, 2012 at 2:02 pm:
its awesome. emotions are powerful indeed :)
 
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albinotiger said...
Jul. 20, 2012 at 7:02 pm:

really powerful with raw emotion!! great work!! :)

 

 
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