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So Obviously There

July 13, 2012
By polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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"Angels don't even come close to you!"

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Take note of his blond hair
Blue-gray eyes
Partially covered
By blond, cloudy skies
Nose too perfect
Smile,
Oh, so warm
Hands
So soft
When they're touching
My hands
My mind is blown
He's all that I need
The solution to my hunger
On his appearance, I feed
With my love burning deep
And easily discovered
He walks away
My heart, is severed
He doesn't say goodbye
He's not anywhere
And he didn't even notice
What was so obviously there

© Seita O., Palatine, IL

The author's comments:
Regrets. They can take over your life if you're not careful. But there are also things you regret, that may have ended in a different outcome.
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