I Have Eyes

July 12, 2012
By Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)


I have eyes
Supposedly windows to the soul
I wonder what could be seen through mine
For they change constantly
Blue in the morning
A green star in the middle
A black hole pulling everything in
The sky
The grass
The flowers
The spiders
The shadows
The people
Green they’ll turn
Every evening
Supposedly
What does it mean
Will I be ever changing
Ever turning
Different
I like it
Odd
I love it
Different
There’s me
A mysterious girl
Ever changing
Ever turning
Ever not the same
So when you meet me
When you know me
Don’t be so sure…


The author's comments:
what do eyes say about a person???

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on Aug. 16 2013 at 11:01 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Thanks for your feedback, i agree after reading it over again. I'll work on it. =D

on May. 20 2013 at 6:43 pm
Clarabelle SILVER, Caracas, Other
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I love the way you constructed this poem, though I'd work a bit on the begining where the ideas aren't very clear

on Jan. 31 2013 at 5:03 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

thank you so much!! i appreciate it.... and i'll see if i can change and move around some words-find out what works...    :D

on Jan. 30 2013 at 7:26 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

I love this! Very well done. however, some of your word choices are a bit iffy, I think you could find better ways to say some of the things you've said.  Once again, I love this, it's beautiful, and in a way, quite eloquent :)

bluhs said...
on Aug. 22 2012 at 4:26 pm
bluhs, E, Alabama
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This is amazing!

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 19 2012 at 4:32 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 724 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Wow. This is absolutely beautiful! Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!


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