Pretty Girl

July 7, 2012
By Hannah2 BRONZE, Lakefield, Other
Hannah2 BRONZE, Lakefield, Other
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Pretty Girl

Pretty girl stop where you are,
The things you do are going too far.
I know you feel that it’s for the best…
But please just wake up and give it a rest.
I’m not your friend, but I’m also not your foe,
So please just hear some things I think you should know.
It’s mean to say what I think of when I think of you…
But I believe you are better than the things you do.
So pretty girl, pull up that shirt,
And maybe lengthen your skirt.
Do not show off so much skin,
And please try to eat as you are already thin.
You have a beautiful face, so maybe lessen your foundation.
And pretty girl please try to understand that with you not every guy has a fixation.
I really do believe you are smart,
So do yourself a favour and act the part.
And excuse me if when I say this I am wrong,
But I do not think that everyone needs to see your thong.
Stop just giving yourself away for free,
Because soon in that manner people will always see.
So pretty girl stop where you are.
It’s time that people saw you for not what you do, but for who you are

The author's comments:
Is it wrong to challenge the controversial stereotypes which form the ideolistic "pretty girl"?

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Hannah2 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2012 at 12:50 pm
Hannah2 BRONZE, Lakefield, Other
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

on Jul. 20 2012 at 12:41 pm
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

i like it. its so true. good work. keep it up.

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