The Wonderful Wind

July 11, 2012
By K.davis2013 BRONZE, Hollandale, Mississippi
K.davis2013 BRONZE, Hollandale, Mississippi
1 article 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
Survival of the fittest

The wonderful wind whistles by the shore

Repeated reminders throughout the day

Telling tales of what is coming

Predicting and preparing us to pray

The wise wind sometimes whispers

The secrets that had been secretly hid.

The author's comments:
Dear Teen Ink Editor,

This year I discovered that Teen Ink has numerous of poems and songs. I like to submit my poem called The Wonderful Wind. As a student of the Delta Writing Project at Simmons High School in Hollandale, MS, I have written poems and short stories about relationships, love, life, and the environment. Through our summer writing course, I have learned the value of line break and consonance to make my writing even stronger. I aspire to use my publication success as a positive example to inspire other writers at my school.

I hope to receive more feedback and thank you for your consideration!


Karrissa D.

Similar Articles


This article has 0 comments.


MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!