i do not dislike it ...
I am afraid of it,
yet silently
I beg for it.
I am afraid of it,
yet silently
I beg for it.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
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FrenchHippieAmazing. It's almost like a haiku in that you used so few words to express something really true and profound. Please check out my work and tell me what you think! Thanks :)
artmantist
hello, nice poem. Would u guys wanna check out my work. its called the cottage
thank u
td123
jaylw
willowwriterFor something so short. It has a big message. I like it. Good job.
crazychick
GothChik95i love this. its so true and can mean so many different things so a lot of different people can relate to it. i love it sooo much!
Zeeba13This has been my absolute favorite so far. Simple but very powerful. I definately relate...
This ehz ah great poem! :D i am speechless... eht says alot... :) i adore this thee most by far...!♥
AYO_itsdeja
hello good bye said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 11:41 am:
Jan. 19, 2011 at 11:41 am:
looks like you put a lot of effort into this
it probably takes effort to get the right words... I agree with the penguin! :)
Killerkate
groomer man said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 3:01 pm:
Oct. 14, 2010 at 3:01 pm:
Well first of all I like it and think its talking about love. We beg for it; when you get hurt in a relationship we're scared to fall in love again, cuz the pain is too unbearable,and in the end we all beg to be loved.
Baller22
gymn88i love your poem it's so true i feel the same way
UrAnGelBabYI really like this poem because i feel the same way =D
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