Touch MAG

July 29, 2008
By Anonymous

i do not dislike it ...
I am afraid of it,
yet silently

I beg for it.


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msvie GOLD said...
on Mar. 28 2016 at 10:23 pm
msvie GOLD, Arlington Heights, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Whether you think you can or can't do it, you are probably right"

Very profound. It was amazing how you got the point across with so few words.

on Dec. 28 2011 at 2:34 am
Pamplemousse SILVER, Gilbert, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"To be happy, Don't do whatever you like, Like whatever you do" -James Barrie (author of Peter Pan)

Amazing. It's almost like a haiku in that you used so few words to express something really true and profound. Please check out my work and tell me what you think! Thanks :)

on Nov. 19 2011 at 5:27 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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hello, nice poem. Would u guys wanna check out my work. its called the cottage 

thank u


td123 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 8:24 pm
td123 BRONZE, Perry, Florida
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This is one of the best poems i have ever read

jaylw GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 6:10 pm
jaylw GOLD, Southgate, Michigan
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simple and to the point with much meaning

on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:53 pm
willowwriter GOLD, Rogers, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"no matter who you are, where you come from, or where you are going, you are always loved"

For something so short. It has a big message. I like it. Good job.

on Jun. 22 2011 at 5:12 pm
crazychick SILVER, Norwich, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Have you ever confused a dream with life? Or stolen something when you have the cash? Have you ever been blue? Or thought your train moving while sitting still? Maybe I was just crazy. Maybe it was the 60's. Or maybe I was just a girl... interrupted

Wow. so simple yet so... wow

on May. 31 2011 at 5:33 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain

very mysterious...i likey...

on Mar. 26 2011 at 12:09 pm
msoccerm345 SILVER, Grimes, Iowa
7 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

i love this. its so true and can mean so many different things so a lot of different people can relate to it.  i love it sooo much! 

on Mar. 6 2011 at 5:25 pm
ha! ha! you see! :P honestly, i like it! :D

on Feb. 23 2011 at 1:37 pm
anonymouse222, CC, Texas
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it probably takes effort to get the right words... I agree with the penguin! :)

on Feb. 23 2011 at 1:35 pm
anonymouse222, CC, Texas
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This has been my absolute favorite so far. Simple but very powerful. I definately relate...

on Feb. 10 2011 at 5:40 pm
GrayPenguin.RR22 BRONZE, Lukachukai, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
you say you miss me, but your doing nothing about it. . .

This ehz ah great poem! :D i am speechless... eht says alot... :) i adore this thee most by far...!♥

on Feb. 10 2011 at 5:38 pm
GrayPenguin.RR22 BRONZE, Lukachukai, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
you say you miss me, but your doing nothing about it. . .

Dude, don't hate! xP

on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:47 pm
AYO_itsdeja BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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OMG, the story of my life ! <3

on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:41 am
looks like you put a lot of effort into this

on Dec. 31 2010 at 6:32 pm
NikkiNitrogen GOLD, Troy, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is the slowest form of suicide."
" The loudest cry is silence."
" Light travel faster then sounde this why most people appear bright until you hear them speak."
"The best beauty comes from the worst pain."

yep deffantly know this feeling

on Oct. 14 2010 at 3:01 pm
Well first of all I like it and think its talking about love. We beg for it; when you get hurt in a relationship we're scared to fall in love again, cuz the pain is too unbearable,and in the end we all beg to be loved.

Baller22 GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 7:04 pm
Baller22 GOLD, New Albany, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Every story has an end, but in life every end is just a new beginning!

check out my poems! please!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 4:08 pm
UrAnGelBabY BRONZE, Pawtucket, Rhode Island
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to chase what you love but be sure to loose yourself in the chase.

I really like this poem because i feel the same way =D


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