Love at First Sight

July 13, 2012
By polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels don't even come close to you!"


They watch
And they glimmer
They pretend not to notice
What they know is there
Love
That emotion
That lives deep
inside
It cowers
And hides
Waiting for the Light
That light that will take it out of the dark
Oh, it will flee alright
Right into your heart
Through your eyes it will travel
As she walks away
It will make you commit
To saying
"Stop, please wait."



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on Jul. 17 2012 at 3:10 am
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I haven't failed. I just haven't found 10,000 ways that won't work. [Thomas Edison]

When words fail, music speaks.

Thanks! :)

on Jul. 16 2012 at 3:56 pm
polar-icecap DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
57 articles 20 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels don't even come close to you!"

I'd love to take a look at some of your poems! That's sounds awesome. Thanks. I appreciate it :D

on Jul. 16 2012 at 3:13 pm
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
3 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
I haven't failed. I just haven't found 10,000 ways that won't work. [Thomas Edison]

When words fail, music speaks.

Aww. Cool poem! :) I like this part: it will make you commit, to saying, "Stop, please wait." Could you please look at some of mine? They're called: Actions in Life and You Make Me Smile. Keep writing! :)




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