Life&Love

July 10, 2012
By TheLastShadowChaos BRONZE, Hohenwald, Tennessee
TheLastShadowChaos BRONZE, Hohenwald, Tennessee
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Life is hard
Love is harder
Time is slow
People are slower
Days pass us by
Soon a year is to come

A heart is like a violin
If you're gentle
It plays
however, if you're harsh
It breaks...



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mb777 GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 1:18 pm
mb777 GOLD, Thornwood, New York
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I like how you incorporated a simile to get your message across!

on Aug. 25 2012 at 5:28 pm
Kat_Poetry BRONZE, Neenah, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"But without the dark, we would never see the stars"

I really like how you can get such a strong message across using so few words. This is really good. :)

on Aug. 25 2012 at 5:27 pm
reasonsiwillneverknow, North Vancouver, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There are too many amazing quotes for me to have a favourite. Here is one i enjoy: \" Some people feel the rain. Others just get wet." - Bob Marley

I really enjoyed the simplicity of this poem. I personally thought it was a bit short and maybe you could have found a way to make it more deep. However i really liked it and thought it was quite beautiful.

on Aug. 25 2012 at 5:27 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

Really Well Written. Liked the comparison of a heart to a violin, very fitting. Good job.

MadHater said...
on Aug. 25 2012 at 5:26 pm
MadHater, Trophy Club, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The only thing we have to fear is fear itself."
-Abraham Lincoln

or

"The price of success is responsibility."
-Winston Churchill

Well written.

on Jul. 28 2012 at 2:18 am
StayClassy1 SILVER, Stockton, California
5 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Buy me food so i know it's real"

AMAZING ;D

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2012 at 2:16 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Great poem.

on Jul. 27 2012 at 9:23 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Totally love the way you compared heart with violin.Though short it is magnificient!!

on Jul. 17 2012 at 7:11 pm
TheLastShadowChaos BRONZE, Hohenwald, Tennessee
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oh i will, dont you worry about that xD

on Jul. 17 2012 at 7:08 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

Aww thats so cute and true!! Like the violin metaphor!

on Jul. 17 2012 at 6:36 pm
EatSleepWrite95 GOLD, Dallastown, Pennsylvania
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Wow, very short but very powerful! Love the comparisons!

on Jul. 14 2012 at 9:33 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

This is a really great poem... I love your comparison of a heart to a violin. In my opinion it could've been longer XD but maybe I just like reading your work. I don't know. Hope you keep writing :3


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