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Black strokes,
Silver hints,
White,
Oh, so much white,
The void where none is found;
My world,
Not vivid,
Detailed.

My plaster,
My background, they say.
But you would know me so much better,
Analyzing their two dimensional demeanor,
Rather than my three dimensional face.



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laurensoccer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2013 at 4:00 pm
I love how this poem expresses so much in such few words. The poem's simplicity but yet the deep thought behind it, together, created a great poem. 
 
ShahiroThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 11, 2013 at 10:57 am
Thank you so much that means a lot!!!!! =D
 
so_joy said...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 10:19 am
Beautiful.
 
ShahiroThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 27, 2012 at 8:33 pm
Thnx I really appreciate it
 
Aduke9 said...
Aug. 22, 2012 at 4:56 pm
This is amazing. I can totally relate to this. Great Job!
 
IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 22, 2012 at 10:29 pm
thx, i found this poem i wrote in my closet under some stuff and i liked it- i had totally forgotten about it!!!! i liked your poem Rage and Envy by the way. it was an interesting idea for the poem too!   =P
 
Aduke9 replied...
Aug. 26, 2012 at 7:22 pm
Thank you :)
 
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