My Mind

July 9, 2012
By MonicaSkittles BRONZE, My Town, Indiana
MonicaSkittles BRONZE, My Town, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Although when there were too many people around-which there certainly were today-it was hard even to remember to say thank you: all those people were like drowning."-
Robin Mckinley; Pegasus


My mind is like a little house,
My peers break into.
They rearrange my furniture,
And the cabinets rifle through.
They throw things out,
They put things it,
And erase the writing on the wall,
And by the time that they walk out,
it's not my mind at all.


The author's comments:
Let me know what you think! This isn't my first draft, but I might continue tweaking it. :)

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on Jul. 13 2012 at 11:51 am
MonicaSkittles BRONZE, My Town, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Although when there were too many people around-which there certainly were today-it was hard even to remember to say thank you: all those people were like drowning."-
Robin Mckinley; Pegasus

Thank you so much!

I'm really glad you like it!


on Jul. 13 2012 at 11:35 am
Aeliss-Novak-the-Zombie-Space-Pirate BRONZE, That Place With All The Trees And Stuff, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is not a word, just a reason not to try.~Kutless

I'm going to smile and make you think I'm happy, I'm going to laugh, so you don't see me cry, I'm going to let you go in style, and even if it kills me - I'm going to smile.~Anonymous

This is great! It's so true.


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