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Our Wedding Day

June 18, 2012
By Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
13 articles 3 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Question Yourself. If someone tells you to change, stay exactly who you are. No one should ever try to change you.


“Will you marry me?” asked Aiden Grey.
And what else could I say?
Of course nothing other than: “I will.”
And you can’t wait until
Our big wedding day,
On a sunny day in May.
Our first kiss
I would never miss.
One gorgeous bride,
And everyone cried.
Then emotion swells.
Here, sing wedding bells.
There flies the dove,
Away with our love.
The love we share,
And I know you care.
Man, that night.
What a sight?
And people say, “Here be dragons.”
And I say, “Those are legends.”


The author's comments:
I wrote this for school this year, and have recently found it. Hopefully you like it. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

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on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:25 pm
Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
13 articles 3 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Question Yourself. If someone tells you to change, stay exactly who you are. No one should ever try to change you.

Thank you for reading it. Aiden Grey is a book character who's adorable, I didn't mean to have him in it. His name just happened to fit nicely in the poem. Thank you again. 

on Feb. 23 2013 at 12:51 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

Well done, deep with rhyme and meaning, though confusing since I do not know who Aiden Grey is. But beyond that this deserves a 5 out of 5.

on Feb. 9 2013 at 10:27 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!!

on Dec. 19 2012 at 6:14 pm
Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
13 articles 3 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Question Yourself. If someone tells you to change, stay exactly who you are. No one should ever try to change you.

hey jetta, it was for school i had to do it as the teacher told me to, not as i pleased.... sadly.... well thanks for the advice and thanks for the reading/rating. Ginger.

on Dec. 19 2012 at 6:00 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Great jon. (: I like this, but if you're going to have a rhyme scheme, it needs to be consistent throughout the piece. Great job!

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2012 at 12:50 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

This poem is so adorable. It made me smile:)

on Jul. 9 2012 at 10:17 am
Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
13 articles 3 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Question Yourself. If someone tells you to change, stay exactly who you are. No one should ever try to change you.

ok to explain "here be dragons" problems in getting married arise in the first year so the dragons represent the problems of the future, but they are legends because they will be happy together. THANKS GUYS! thought i would clear that up quick...