July 6, 2012
By Thoughtsofthewise GOLD, New Orleans, Louisiana
Thoughtsofthewise GOLD, New Orleans, Louisiana
12 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Someone's thoughts may be as deep as the ocean, but if you're smart you will discover them.

I was in a world filled with piece, joy, and love; no violence, no hatred, and the lotalty was just too much. As i continued to observe this fine scenery, it all came so very clear to me; this is how life's supposed to be, i should be able to enjoy life without catasthrophe, we should have joy with no agony. i mean actually i'm not trying to preach, i'm just trying to talk, we should include faith so we won't stumble when we walk, we should be the light for when a brother gets lost in the dark, we should still show love even when the going gets tough. i had discovered i had an imortant message to deliver, when suddenly i woke up ...

The author's comments:

Similar Articles


This article has 2 comments.

on Nov. 18 2013 at 6:45 pm
Peacemakerz PLATINUM, Cupertino, California
25 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world will never have lasting peace so long as men reserve for war the finest human qualities. Peace, no less than war, requires idealism and self-sacrifice and a righteous and dynamic faith.
-John Foster Dulles

I luv this poem! Totally can relate to it, because as my name suggest my dream has always been to have peace.

Ms. Schain said...
on Jul. 11 2012 at 5:09 pm
This poem is fantastic. It captures one person's perspective so well, and the twist at the end is a clear demonstration of insight. 

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!