July 6, 2012
I was in a world filled with piece, joy, and love; no violence, no hatred, and the lotalty was just too much. As i continued to observe this fine scenery, it all came so very clear to me; this is how life's supposed to be, i should be able to enjoy life without catasthrophe, we should have joy with no agony. i mean actually i'm not trying to preach, i'm just trying to talk, we should include faith so we won't stumble when we walk, we should be the light for when a brother gets lost in the dark, we should still show love even when the going gets tough. i had discovered i had an imortant message to deliver, when suddenly i woke up ...

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Peacemakerz said...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 6:45 pm
I luv this poem! Totally can relate to it, because as my name suggest my dream has always been to have peace.
Ms. Schain said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 5:09 pm
This poem is fantastic. It captures one person's perspective so well, and the twist at the end is a clear demonstration of insight. 
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