I Love You, I Love You, That's What They All Say

July 5, 2012
By ignorance_is_bliss PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
ignorance_is_bliss PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"This is what it is, this is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didn't wanna fall but I about to crawl
I met the one with two scarred hands"

-Newsboys, Born Again


Stop and Go, Green and Red. Back and Forth, Up and Down, Stop and Go
Scream and Murmur, Argue and Agree, Hate and Love, Scream and Murmur
I Love You, I Love You, that's what They all say. Get it over with, slam the door, where did My Life go? I Love You, I Love You, That's what they all say.
Green light means go, it means Okay. Red light means No, not okay, close the door where did Your Lives go?
The lies I've told, the lies of Old, only so you'd be convinced. Ya, I'm fine! Live your life! At least, the one you used to have...
I Love You, I Love You, that's what They all say. Get it over with, slam the door, where did My Life go? I Love You, I Love You, that's what They all say.

Is that what You say? Of course it is, because that's what They all say


The author's comments:
This is about my parents fighting if you haven't figured from the piece.....

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on May. 12 2013 at 10:45 pm
BleedingHeartsBeat SILVER, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
I find the earth to be a place of misery in which I am surrounded by the conformity that kills society. -Matt LeBlanc

Hi hey hello! This is Kaylan. I had that stupid blog on gaggle. I love your poetry.

on Jul. 6 2012 at 3:22 pm
ignorance_is_bliss PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
27 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This is what it is, this is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didn't wanna fall but I about to crawl
I met the one with two scarred hands"

-Newsboys, Born Again

hey, i just read ur poem secrets. it was outstanding!

on Jul. 5 2012 at 9:01 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

This was really good! If you could check out my poem "Secrets" i would really appreciate it!

on Jul. 5 2012 at 8:46 pm
Apennine BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Knowledge is power. Power corrupts. So study hard and be evil.\"

Good job. I like the end of your poem.

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 4:24 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I really like your beginning stanzas of this poem. Great job. I really like the format and how you repeat that how they all say. Great poem. Your ending was good. Suggestion I would extend on the ending lines and add why they all say that.

on Jul. 5 2012 at 4:18 pm
dark_stars96 SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You cant hate some one whose dead" Kerosene by Miranda Lambert

I love it :)


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