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Oblivion

June 24, 2012
By Anonymous

Darkness..
Nothingness..
Another dimension?
Another place?
Another world?
Death..
It takes..
But doesn't give back..
Find the light!
Find it..
Be saved..
From death..
Or fall..
Fall deep within..
Let it take you..
where?
Unknown..
Your choice..
Fight..
Find the light..
Or fall..
In the dark..
Forever..
Lost



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on Jun. 30 2012 at 8:06 pm
Amarande BRONZE, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Quotations

“One day at a time--this is enough. Do not look back and grieve over the past for it is gone; and do not be troubled about the future, for it has not yet come. Live in the present, and make it so beautiful it will be worth remembering.” ~unknown~

kk  thanks! :)

on Jun. 30 2012 at 6:25 pm
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER, Muskego, Wisconsin
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I have a suggestion for you. To make your writing more intersting for readers use more adjectives. It adds to any writing and makes it better. Keep Writing.