Oblivion

By , Amarillo, TX
Darkness..
Nothingness..
Another dimension?
Another place?
Another world?
Death..
It takes..
But doesn't give back..
Find the light!
Find it..
Be saved..
From death..
Or fall..
Fall deep within..
Let it take you..
where?
Unknown..
Your choice..
Fight..
Find the light..
Or fall..
In the dark..
Forever..
Lost





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Little-Irish-Girl said...
Jun. 30, 2012 at 6:25 pm
I have a suggestion for you. To make your writing more intersting for readers use more adjectives. It adds to any writing and makes it better. Keep Writing.
 
Amarande replied...
Jun. 30, 2012 at 8:06 pm
kk  thanks! :)
 
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