There's Blood, There's Pain

June 25, 2012
By tatertot1994 BRONZE, Roanoke, Illinois
tatertot1994 BRONZE, Roanoke, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
walk by faith, not by sight

She's gone, he's gone, and every one's gone
I'm freaking out right now
There's no one to help me!
I'm ripping out my hair out
I feel like, I feel like dying!
Please come and help me...
There's blood and there's pain!
Is there anybody out there?!
It feels like I'm suffocating!
My breath is taken away...
Oh... I said! There's blood and there's pain!
Oh GOD! Come and help me! it feels like I'm going through hell!
OOOH... Come and help me .... OOH

The author's comments:
This song that I wrote a few years ago was because I did feel suffocated in my life because my parents were on the edge of getting a divorce. Luckily they are now working things out

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Lia692 said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:17 pm
Lia692, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Life should be viewed from afar and lived from close up."

Very passionate. The format works well with the poem.


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