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There's Blood, There's Pain

June 25, 2012
By tatertot1994 BRONZE, Roanoke, Illinois
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tatertot1994 BRONZE, Roanoke, Illinois
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She's gone, he's gone, and every one's gone
I'm freaking out right now
There's no one to help me!
I'm ripping out my hair out
I feel like, I feel like dying!
Please come and help me...
There's blood and there's pain!
Is there anybody out there?!
It feels like I'm suffocating!
My breath is taken away...
Oh... I said! There's blood and there's pain!
Oh GOD! Come and help me! it feels like I'm going through hell!
OOOH... Come and help me .... OOH

© Felicia F, Marlow, OK

The author's comments:
This song that I wrote a few years ago was because I did feel suffocated in my life because my parents were on the edge of getting a divorce. Luckily they are now working things out
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Lia692 said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:17 pm
Lia692, Spokane, Washington
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"Life should be viewed from afar and lived from close up."

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Very passionate. The format works well with the poem.