FANMADE

June 22, 2012
By nakoLa PLATINUM, Springhill, Florida
nakoLa PLATINUM, Springhill, Florida
45 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is not about waiting for the stom to pass.
Its about learning to dance in the rain.


Never understood, never felt…
Thousands, sometimes millions
Screaming boys and girls-mainly the later
Sometimes sitting but more often standing…
Shoulder to shoulder, waist to waist, toe to toe
A wave of body heat entangled with the music
The vibrations, the beat, the heartbeats
Admiration…tilted necks
Focus on their object of desire
Hidden messages behind their screams
“I want to be with him/her!”
“I want to be like him/her!”
Conscious wishful thinking
The crowd’s awareness (of the above)…at least that’s what I hope for
Anyways—
Now
I _as well_
Am FANMADE



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on Jun. 29 2012 at 7:11 am
nakoLa PLATINUM, Springhill, Florida
45 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is not about waiting for the stom to pass.
Its about learning to dance in the rain.

Thank you so much! I used to not show my work to anyone, so this feedback makes me really happy :D

Lia692 said...
on Jun. 28 2012 at 7:19 pm
Lia692, Spokane, Washington
0 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life should be viewed from afar and lived from close up."

Great imagery. Well put-together and a joy to read.




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