About to Sleep

June 16, 2012
By ForeverDreaming BRONZE, Acme, Pennsylvania
ForeverDreaming BRONZE, Acme, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not a perfect person, I make a lot of mistakes... but still, I love the people who stay with me after knowing who I really am.~

If God brings you to it then he will bring you through it.


As I lay down my head to sleep
Staring up at the dark ceiling
Smelling the light lavender fragrance
Dancing around my room,
I think about my day.
The wrong things I never should have said or done
And the things that I should have.
I think to myself
Tomorrow I will right the wrongs
And change it all.
I will find new friends to enjoy life with
And I will keep in touch with the ones I have.
I will kiss my brothers forehead
As he lies down to sleep.
I will be a better person
And make no regrets.

And then the next night
I say it all again.


The author's comments:
When this happens to me I go crazy... how about you? This is my first poem on here so please comment. :D

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bigblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 4:08 pm
bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is Love."-The Beatles

You're very welcome! And thank you, I appreciate it

on Jun. 26 2012 at 9:24 pm
ForeverDreaming BRONZE, Acme, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not a perfect person, I make a lot of mistakes... but still, I love the people who stay with me after knowing who I really am.~

If God brings you to it then he will bring you through it.

Thank you for commenting!!! :D And I will check out your works.

bigblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2012 at 12:00 pm
bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is Love."-The Beatles

I really enjoyed this poem. Very nice job, the last two lines bring it to a great close. Good work. Please take a look at some of my work and comment if you don't mind :)

on Jun. 24 2012 at 3:03 pm
Caleb.Andrews, London, Other
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This is a very good poem! I can feel the emotion very well.


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