Recognition

May 26, 2012
By Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".


take my hand as our one-sided world crumbles down,
lead my feet to a toxin free pristine ground.
hide my words from the inexpressible world around,
the caring shrouded people unable to make a noticed sound.
to fix this world and our limitless needs,
we musn't speak from the rules of our government trustees,
but speak from our hushed opinions that are so unperceived.
to face the bitter truth, the actuality,
that this world isn't gonna change,
unless we step up our game.
recognize its not nature but us we need to tame,
grasp the idea if we carry on the same,
our precious individual lives will be full of anguish and pain.


The author's comments:
Genuisness
if this offends anyone, that was not my intention. This is my personal opinion that we take our lives fro granted and don't look at the side effects of the way we live.
change can happen but we need to help!!?

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on Jun. 30 2012 at 1:11 am
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
14 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".

sure thing! and thank yah(:

damsel SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2012 at 9:42 am
damsel SILVER, Mumbai, Other
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Mit guten willen kann man alles machen. ( means... with gud will, one can do anything)

great work....

on Jun. 24 2012 at 3:08 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

nice piece. Keep posting! :-) check out my poem ghosts of the past if you dont mind. Please? 

AriShine GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2012 at 9:08 pm
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
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"Whatever you are, be a good one." -Abraham Lincoln

Love! Nice message. Watch your punctuation. :)




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