Beauty of a Dream

June 12, 2012
By werty5love SILVER, Temecula, California
werty5love SILVER, Temecula, California
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You took my hand
As it slowly went cold
You pulled me close
And held me tight
In this dreaded World of Night

You saved my life
Then took my hand
And led me into a distant land
With flowers glowing bright
And a river running deep
You went and showed me every delight

The lightning cracked down
Lighting up the world
As the rain ran down
My tilted up face
I laughed at the boom
You squeezed my hand
And then I knew

That when i looked down
You'd hold me tight
And never let go
Until you kissed 'Goodnight'

As you started to move
I opened my eyes
To my sleek white room


The author's comments:
So I was in class one day and i started day dreaming about distant places. When i came to everything seemed so dull and lifeless that i wanted to go back to that dreamland. I hope you can always remember what nature and life looks like even in boring gray rooms.

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on Jul. 12 2014 at 2:30 am
TheOceansBlackBird SILVER, Richmond, California
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Favorite Quote:
One persons craziness is another persons reality
-Tim Burton

and then there's this one
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I loved every second... you can almost feel the dreamland yourself when reading this poem...

_Emmm SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2013 at 6:31 am
_Emmm SILVER, Burlington, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Poetry is an orphan of silence. The words never quite equal the experience behind them.”
- Charles Simic

I really enjoyed this. Completely understood the feeling.

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 9 2013 at 9:56 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

I wish i was in your poem right now, feeling a super connections to this.

on Jun. 25 2012 at 7:35 pm
curlygurlray GOLD, Visalia, California
18 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
you have the life you let yourself take.

i liked this because i understood the feeling keep up the good work(:




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