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There's a love everlasting,
That burns deep within us.
An undying ember,
That neither water nor sand can quench.
And though we think the fire doused,
It can never be put out.
The fire is given,
As a gift.
Though sometimes we misgive,
And are hurt.
But every fire, has its fuel.
And each fire endures until its fuel is found.
Fire feeds off of fire.
That of another.
Sometimes the fire-fuel match is never found,
But the match still exists.
There is a fire-fuel match for all of us,
one that never dies.
And for every flame joined with another,
A bonfire arises.
And born from the ashes,
Rises a phoenix,
The emblem of life eternal.
The way of life eternal is
Love.
Love,
and be loved.
Love with a fiery passion,
Forever.





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CeCelia32 said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 11:22 am
I LOOOOVE this poem... it is really great, and you express your feelings on the topic of love amazingly :) it was great. keep writing!
 
bigblue replied...
Jul. 19, 2012 at 5:39 pm

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for the feedback :)

 

 
Caleb.Andrews said...
Jun. 25, 2012 at 8:43 pm
Great poem! I really like the repetition of "fire" throughout the poem, it really adds substance and shows your creativity. The same applies for the word "love" at the end. Some poets' uses of repetition is not so great, but you certainly have this skill.
 
bigblue replied...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 4:01 pm
Thank you so much for your positive feedback! :)
 
gossamergirl said...
Jun. 25, 2012 at 4:17 pm
LOVED IT!!!!! so true i liked the harry potter reference with the pheonix
 
bigblue replied...
Jun. 25, 2012 at 5:18 pm
haha glad somebody finally got the reference! :) glad you enjoyed it.
 
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