June 10, 2012
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I see through the words,
And the actions.
I know them all too well.
I've heard them all before,
And will hear them all again.
But in the end,
You're just another mistake.
Just another,
Slap in the face.
Hello, reality.
Goodbye, cloud nine.
I free fall through the skies of love,
And land flat on my face.
I lie there,
Until I slowly,
So slowly,
Pick myself up.
You are behind me.
And the world is ahead.
Hello, world.
Goodbye, mistake.
It does not matter how many times I fall,
But how many times I rise.
I hold on to hope.
And I know,
All will be well.
All is not over.
Hope is not lost.
There is goodness still.

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MountEverestThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 8:46 pm
I LOVE THIS POEM ! It's seriously genius! :) And thanks again for you're comment on my poem
bigblue replied...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 10:11 pm
Im so gals you liked it! And you're quite welcome :)
originalityisdeadd said...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 4:26 pm
I love this (: Wow, you're great blueee.
bigblue replied...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 7:12 am
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it :)
JoPepper said...
Jun. 26, 2012 at 1:20 pm
I really like the meaning and how you described it.  What did you mean by "cloud nine"?  Very good job keep writing! :)
bigblue replied...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 4:07 pm
Cloud nine is sort of like a non-existing place that people use to describe the feeling of being giddy, on top of the world. And thank you :)
SamanthaJoelle said...
Jun. 21, 2012 at 7:00 pm
I really like the idea of this poem. No matter how many times you try, you know it's not worth it and you still carry on. Nice work!
bigblue replied...
Jun. 21, 2012 at 10:25 pm
Thank you, so glad you liked it!
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