Prom 2012

May 31, 2012
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"


Sweaty, dark, crowed dance floor
Everyone packed on like stuffed luggage
Glittering disco ball and bright colorful flashing lights
Allow me to see my partner’s face for a second
Heavy breathing, close contact
My arms around your neck
Your hands on my waist
I’m pressed against your chest
Our legs are brushing up together
I can feel your heart racing and your quick breaths
My eyes are closed
Dried up corsage
Lovely white roses are turning antiqued brown
Your rose pink boutonnière fell into your pocket
Ink black tuxes, bowties, vests
Shiny black patent leather shoes that hurt
Long flowing ball gowns, shirt miniskirts
High heels and petals strewn around
Bare feet thumping on the dance floor
Music blaring into your eardrums
The Last Song
The last soft romantic kiss
It’s midnight
The lights come up



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on Oct. 17 2013 at 6:50 pm
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Well I'm glad you had a great time! :)

on Oct. 17 2013 at 2:42 pm
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

love it! good job and great descriptions 

on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:02 pm
bruisedmemories ELITE, Birdsboro, Pennsylvania
109 articles 10 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you're young, you can fly, but we trip on clouds 'cause we get too high" -The Band Perry (Song: Don't Let Me Be Lonely)
"Cause no matter what, you'll never be alone" -Lady Antebellum (Song: Compass)

I really like this! It clearly paints a picture of what happens at a prom. Nice job!


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