writing with emotions

June 11, 2012
By deedog SILVER, Anaconda, Montana
deedog SILVER, Anaconda, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"everything has it's beauty but not everyone sees it"

i can write with a thread of hope and a thimble of forgiveness
i can write with no hatred and all love
i can write with the sparkling eye of surprise
i can write waterfalls of tears
i can write with plants of growing rage
i can write with mountains of stress and holes of despair
i can write with floating clouds of laughter and skies full of wonder

The author's comments:
the day i wrote this i was having a lot of mixed emotions and i needed to release some feelings so i wrote this pieces.

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on Jun. 15 2012 at 10:41 am
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
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Sparkling eye of surprise...I love that line. This is really cool. I love the way you write. I would be so happy if you could give me some feedback on my own poetry:)


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