My mind a curse

June 7, 2012
By Blackwolfen BRONZE, Sarasota, Florida
Blackwolfen BRONZE, Sarasota, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is a fine line between neutral and amoral. In fact, there may not be a line at all."

-Count Dooku


The human mind is a blessing
Mine is a curse
Some see the world as a play toy
Some give up and leave the race
I see the world as a ball of hurt and pain
Fear anger anxiety
I bear them all
The starving girl, clinging to her like a demon
The girl at the bus stop, head in hands
Because her one has become her none
My mind is a curse my back is carrying the weight
of a million sorrows pains and fears
There is one who was set before me
and carries this burden i carry
But my mind is a curse
the heart is a blessing.


The author's comments:
This is how my mind works sometimes

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on May. 28 2013 at 4:14 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Before I sound completely pretentious....who were you alluding to in the last bit of your poem..."there is one who was set before me and carries this burden I carry?" Sometimes your stuff sounds almost religious. But maybe I'm reading into it. And this was really good!!

on Aug. 14 2012 at 7:18 am
lipglosser PLATINUM, Merrimack, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding." -Khalil Gibran

I love it! Great job with your poem, do us all a favor and keep writing, your really great :)

on Jul. 11 2012 at 8:42 am
Blackwolfen BRONZE, Sarasota, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is a fine line between neutral and amoral. In fact, there may not be a line at all."

-Count Dooku

Please email me or text me. I miss you.

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on Jul. 11 2012 at 8:36 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Wow this is really good Mike. I really like your beginning stanzas. I feel your heart and pain. Great emotions. Suggestion: maybe next time end with a hook

on Jul. 11 2012 at 8:35 am
TheLastShadowChaos BRONZE, Hohenwald, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 17 comments
This is great, its sorta explains how i feel about some of the things going on in this world xD

on Jul. 1 2012 at 11:40 pm
taterbug235 SILVER, Flora, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never underestimate the impossible.

wow your work is amazing!!!! i feel your hurt!! just remember some people are here to help carry your sorrows!!! :)

on Jul. 1 2012 at 6:49 pm
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
4 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay Strong! <3

Omg this is so beautiful mike! 'My mind is a curse my back is carrying the weight of a million sorrows pains and fears' my favorite line<3

on Jun. 26 2012 at 12:00 pm
Blackwolfen BRONZE, Sarasota, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is a fine line between neutral and amoral. In fact, there may not be a line at all."

-Count Dooku

Thanks KeepLiving. I appreciate it.

on Jun. 26 2012 at 11:58 am
HeatherOlivia GOLD, Solothurn, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"All things truly wicked start from innocence." - Ernest Hemingway

this is beautiful. that's all i can say. Inspirational.


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