Dear Other me

June 4, 2012
By andromeda13 SILVER, Barrie, Other
andromeda13 SILVER, Barrie, Other
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Dear other me,
The me that isn’t me,
The me that isn’t human,
I just want to tell you,
I hate you,

I hate that way you whisper in my ear,
That I could never be strong enough,
That I could never be good enough,
When you tell me that I could never try hard enough,
I Hate You,

I hate the way your shadow overwhelms me,
Your darkness consumes me,
And you tell me, that I will never escape,
That I will never be big enough,
I Hate You

I hate the way you make me angry,
The way you tell me I could never get by on my own,
You make me wish I was alone,
And I am slowly beginning to think you are right,
I HATE YOU

I hate that without you I wouldn’t push myself farther,
I will never stop trying to prove you wrong,
I tell myself I will keep getting better,
And that I will make myself strong,
So . . . thank you.



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butterfly123 said...
on Jun. 19 2012 at 2:49 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! amaziing poem! i love the whole theme. the repetetions worked quite well. great work and keep writing :D

on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:12 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

Wow thats very true, how self doubt can hold us back but then later mkes us push harder! So great job! Keep writing!

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 16 2012 at 7:29 pm
Oh, and by the way, this follows a similar theme as my poem titled A Muse. Since your writing style seems similar, would you mind checking it out and posting a comment? I would love your feedback! :D

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 16 2012 at 7:28 pm
Wow, awesome work. I laughed at the ending (not in a mean way, in an appreciative way). It's so quirky! What a wonderful twist. Loved it. 5 stars. I liked the repeated I hate you with slight changes each time until you change it at the end. I like it. Great work. :D




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