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things in my life

vanilla skys
to black covered flies
to deep rich lies
and light blue eyes
too heavy keyes
big fat bumble bees
late due fees
and deep blue seas
to the sun shine
speeding ticket fines
a long marching lineand a god written sign



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lovingangel94 said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 8:15 am:
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this poem is amazing
 
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Silver-wingedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 1:09 pm:

for this poem you have to re read it to understand what is being said.

It captivates the reader wanting to know what the author is trying to say or why did the author write this.

I love the poem AND the picture

 

 
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Creativity_1995_William said...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 1:09 pm:
It was well written. I loved it. :)
 
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monky99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 11, 2012 at 6:35 pm:
I really like it, it was slightly confusing, but once you re-read it it makes more sense, i like the meaning behind it, good use of symbolism :)
 
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GingerGirlOnFire said...
Jun. 11, 2012 at 11:15 am:
I GET IT! XD at first i was cunfused but now i get it.... I think its really nicely wriitten.... KEEP IT UP!
 
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