June 3, 2012
By SimranRazdan GOLD, Hyderabad, Other
SimranRazdan GOLD, Hyderabad, Other
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You once told me
'bout the Other Side
and i replied
oh yes I Believe

It started with small things
you said you'd be there
only in your words
did I Believe

The whole world against you
yet i stood by you
I'd look into your eyes
and say I Believe

Just a smile
or an embrace I'd need
to be stronger by my Belief
yet i said i Believe

What compelled you?
what did I do wrong?
what did you get
from shattering my Belief?

So now if you come
And tell me about the Other Side
I would reply
no, I don't Believe

The author's comments:
it's a simple poem inspired by betrayal and breaking of trust.
In case you're wondering, the Other side can be interpreted in many ways. It can be a dream of fantasy an impossibility or a place. It depends on the reader's perspective. Do comment and help me improve further.

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This article has 3 comments.

sk91 said...
on Jul. 19 2013 at 1:23 pm
It is a mature thought. A person can trust a person, an idea, a way of life, only to be betrayed by it all one day. Thereby, shattering the belief of blind trust. 

Keep going Simran, you'll only get better with time!

on Jul. 25 2012 at 6:30 am
SimranRazdan GOLD, Hyderabad, Other
10 articles 0 photos 34 comments
thank you ;)

on Jul. 24 2012 at 11:32 am
SaiPriyatham BRONZE, Hyderabad, Other
1 article 0 photos 6 comments
cannt be expressed in words 


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