June 4, 2012
love brings glory
in the beauty of it all it also brings pain
but most of all it brings hope that one day
things will be different

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Eirias said...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 8:26 pm

Ummm . . . I'm not sure how I can help you fix this . . . mostly, this seem like something that would help you on a personal, emotional level (I have to do it too), but I'm not sure this is something made for others to see at a contest . . . then again, I'm sure no one but the artist would have called those random color scribbles to art--just raw emotion--but here they are in all the galleries.

As far as I'm concerned, this is to poetry as those random colors are to art, in which case ... (more »)

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