L.O.V.E

June 4, 2012
By screamoteen SILVER, Butler, Pennsylvania
screamoteen SILVER, Butler, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
were everything lies still when everything is silent... you are living in your own world.... whereas in reality things move change and become something either monsterous or beautiful in its own way. reality is a song that everyone sings.


love brings glory
in the beauty of it all it also brings pain
but most of all it brings hope that one day
someday...
things will be different


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my best friend Kayla..

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Eirias SILVER said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 8:26 pm
Eirias SILVER, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you wish to be a writer, write" -Epictetus

Ummm . . . I'm not sure how I can help you fix this . . . mostly, this seem like something that would help you on a personal, emotional level (I have to do it too), but I'm not sure this is something made for others to see at a contest . . . then again, I'm sure no one but the artist would have called those random color scribbles to art--just raw emotion--but here they are in all the galleries.

As far as I'm concerned, this is to poetry as those random colors are to art, in which case the uncapitalized letters and such might be a benefit.

And try reducing the number of "it"s.



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