As I lie here

June 7, 2012
By Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes

As I lie here
Wasted and shaking:
You hold my heart,
Free for the taking.

I'm going insane
My mind I have lost it:
I'm shaking, crying--
Here, in my closet.

Where are you?
What's happening?
Where have you been?
I'm scared, confused,
My thoughts in...

Help me! Help me!
Read all about it--
I'm dying
I'm crying
Hear me shout it.

Love me,
Please love me?
Where are you?

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This article has 2 comments.

vazenitran98 said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 7:18 am
vazenitran98, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet."

This was a bit mournful,but I like the meaning of love in it. So many things that only a poet could do,and expressing things is one of them. You,there have a talent for expressing the feelings! ;)

teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2012 at 4:10 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
1 article 0 photos 49 comments
wow, I really like this poem, I can relate to it :) please check out mine, too. 


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