Hidden or being seen.

June 6, 2012
I try to hide,
but they always seem to find me.

They are really good at seeing though me costumes.

They never give me away,
thank goodness for that.

When I hide, they know why
and let me hide.

Its good I can hide,
cause i would rather be hidden then be seen.

People who are always seen,
always can be destroyed by nothing.

People who are hidden don't need the things that people who are seen need.

So let me hide
and I will let you be seen

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uniqueman34 said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 9:52 pm
i love this!!!!!! i hope that you can be seen and still enjoy it rather being hidden all the time. but i do understnad that it is good to hide at times.
DanielM said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 10:14 am
Kiry....... I like this poem. I like the message. But it got me thinking. Everybody likes to hide instead of branch out. Mhm....anyhow great job Suggestion: minor spelling errors. Your a beast at poetry keep it up!!!!!!
zendaya said...
Jul. 27, 2012 at 4:35 pm
i really like this one , this is how i am a lot if the time too i could never put it to words though :)
Breana S. said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 5:04 pm
i really like this one!  i understand  really the message that ur saying i give it a 10 of 10  d\(^_^)/b!
spudbud This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2012 at 10:10 am
Very nice poem, and it made me think, which I love. There are a few spelling and grammer errors, but aside from that it's great!
2014Nation said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 11:00 pm
I really like this! .(:
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