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when she turned to I

when SHE was
younger
SHE was afraid of everything
SHE found it hard to get over things
SHE couldn't trust
SHE never believed in HERSELF

now SHE IS
older
SHE ISN'T afraid as much
SHE still can't get over things
But least SHE learned to trust more or less
SHE believes in HERSELF more then ever

Let me tell you a secret she
is I and I is she

We have learned from our past
and will get better in the future.



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DanielM said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 10:10 am:
Kiry.. 4 words your a awesome poet! I really can relate to this honestly cause I use to be scared of stuff. I like how you did a before and after type of feel. Suggestion: why did you capitalize certain words. Just wondering
 
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justme242 said...
Jul. 22, 2012 at 5:59 pm:
yeah it is simple but really good and i can relate
 
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MeMadiGraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 20, 2012 at 12:59 pm:
I like this it is really simple and amazing! keep writing! 
 
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