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Perfect

I wish life was perfect.
No fighting,no violence, no danger.
It would be easy and nice.
Everything would be simple.
If only life was perfect...



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so_joy said...
Aug. 7, 2012 at 4:18 pm
We all wish for perfection, although what that may be is different for all of us. Great job! And Kestrel described it well when she relatd to the book Matched. It's one of my favorite books. Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
 
KestrelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 11, 2012 at 12:41 pm
It'd be nice, wouldn't it? But then everyone would be the same, and no one would have character. Sounds like the book Matched. It's similar to Delirium, but I like Delirium much better. :-) i highly suggest it. 
 
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