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Servantile,--infantile
he who lets candle guide
Cosmos--for the intuitive heart
But Heaven--for the heart that seeks in vain



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TheShyOne This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 12:04 am:
I really like this, all things related to the universe/galaxy/astrology have always been beautiful and aluring to me, and this poem is short but sweet. It was such a pretty concept, and I almost want to say that it could be longer, but it doesn't need to be! The fact that it says so much in so little is actually really nice. :) 
 
LondonEye This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 2:20 pm :

I'm really pleased that somebody enjoyed and related to this poem! I'm trying to learn to say more with less wordage...thank you for noticing.

I love your user name, by the way. :)

 
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