Emotions

May 29, 2012
By Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now


Sorrow, Frustration, Isolation...
Revenge
builds within me.

There are people who
made me who I am.
They try to rip me from my happiness.

My eyes are red everyday,
I cry everyday,
I think about what happened in the
PAST
and what is happening NOW everyday.

I might as well be dead
with a black crow or even raven
sitting on my gravestone,
but I will not rest in peace.
The sigh of murder and death.

They say:
"the eyes are windows to your soul."
My soul is clouded with fog.
This fog is my revenge.

I silently wait for the
Sorrow, Frustration, Isolation... Revenge
of my day to come.

My tears shatter
as they hit Hell
while I see what comes before me.


The author's comments:
I wrote this on 3/12/11
Now I only feel sorrow and isolation... and just a little bit frustrated

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on Apr. 6 2013 at 11:14 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

i really like this i think; its very well written.  you can definately feel the emotion and frustration through your diction and use of imagery- great job! 

on Feb. 10 2013 at 7:55 pm
WhiteSwan13 SILVER, Hawera, Other
8 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is Impossible & We Live and Learn

I love it!!!!

qbreezy said...
on Oct. 3 2012 at 7:06 pm
qbreezy, Chicago, Illinois
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great job it was very deep yet artistic

EMarie GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2012 at 9:25 pm
EMarie GOLD, Joplin, Missouri
19 articles 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage comes in all sizes, but fits only a few.
What is wise is not always right and what is right is not always wise.
Knowing what is wrong and right is not choosing which to fight.
-All of these are by me

It's brilliant! I feel like that a lot. It's really really good. I hope that one day soon, your pain will end and that you'll be happy. But seriously, I think your a brilliant poet(: Can't wait to see more of your work!

Hannabug GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2012 at 6:58 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

This is a very good poem! It is well written and it is very mysterious which I like

on Sep. 1 2012 at 4:26 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

Thank you so much for saying that. Also, for commenting on my poem :-)

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 22 2012 at 6:51 pm
Oh, that makes sense. Just thought you might want to provide more clarity on the end. Not trying to be difficult. :)

on Jun. 22 2012 at 6:46 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

i don't say what i see whats comes before me, because it is up to the reader to come up with reasons of what would make the character act the way she does- it's one of the purposes of poetry,  not being forthright about everything, it allows up to think, you are suppose to think, which then enables to expand to your mind.

InkWriter13 said...
on Jun. 22 2012 at 6:19 pm
Mysterious poem. A disctinctive tone to you--established well through your words. Truly a great poet. Powerful and dramatic, certainly, like Apollo77, said. Amazing imagery. Not sure I understand the ending. What do you see that comes before you?? Confused. Other than, it speaks with clarity and intensity. Great work. Would you please comment on my poems titled Without the Writer, Angelic Beings, and Hidden Deep Within?

on Jun. 22 2012 at 11:16 am
Apollo77 PLATINUM, Brunswick, Ohio
20 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.”
"Madame, all stories, if continued far enough, end in death, and he is no true-story teller who would keep that from you."
-Ernest Hemingway

Powerful, dramatic, Beutiful

KylieK GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2012 at 10:47 pm
KylieK GOLD, Mt. Washington, Kentucky
11 articles 0 photos 270 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love is to surpass one's self."

I like it! I've never read a poet like you!


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