Cant you see

May 20, 2012
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you have got me off center
you hurt me everyday
you don't realize its everyway
that you say you're sorry
but do you really mean it
I can't say that i'm happy
because you are too sappy
with words that are meant for calming me
but i don't think you can see
that im not alright
and you are not that bright
you can't see the sad seed
that's planted in my need

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Basya44 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 6:30 pm
The sad seed that is planted in my n!eed. How amazingly interesting! There is a lot of meaning in that phrase. Very clever! You would probabably love my poetry. I use a lot of interesting phrases like that. Maybe you should chack it out! Try PLUTO, or Aloof. Keep up with the good work
Kenziemcm13 said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 9:15 pm
Interesting! I really enjoyed this piece of work! Can you go check out some of my work I would be ever s grateful to hear what your opinions on them are! I would be honored for someone of your skill to read/rate comment on some of mine! :)
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