Cant you see

May 20, 2012
By charolet BRONZE, Mounds View, Minnesota
charolet BRONZE, Mounds View, Minnesota
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Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former.

maybe this will be better
you have got me off center
you hurt me everyday
you don't realize its everyway
that you say you're sorry
but do you really mean it
I can't say that i'm happy
because you are too sappy
with words that are meant for calming me
but i don't think you can see
that im not alright
and you are not that bright
you can't see the sad seed
that's planted in my need

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on Jun. 6 2012 at 6:30 pm
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
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The sad seed that is planted in my n!eed. How amazingly interesting! There is a lot of meaning in that phrase. Very clever! You would probabably love my poetry. I use a lot of interesting phrases like that. Maybe you should chack it out! Try PLUTO, or Aloof. Keep up with the good work

on Jun. 5 2012 at 9:15 pm
Kenziemcm13 PLATINUM, Rutherfordton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
A simple story can tell an entire story!~~ ME
Pictures tell a 1000 words~IDK :P

Interesting! I really enjoyed this piece of work! Can you go check out some of my work I would be ever s grateful to hear what your opinions on them are! I would be honored for someone of your skill to read/rate comment on some of mine! :)


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