May 31, 2012
By MidnightBlue18 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
MidnightBlue18 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont mistake kindness for weakness.

A golden light plays everywhere
Showing us the path to our future
To happiness
To change
We grow older everyday
We adapt in a new way
We see things in a different view
Time goes by without us even knowing
So how can we describe autumn?
Is there an answer?
As we move forward in our lives

The author's comments:
Not one of my best work, but I still wanted to share it with you =)

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on Nov. 3 2012 at 5:18 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I read the first 3 lines and added it to my favorites. This is a beautiful poem!

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 8:25 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I liked your poem. Great job. Good message. Suggestion add a little bit of emotion.


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