Autumn

May 31, 2012
By MidnightBlue18 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
MidnightBlue18 SILVER, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Dont mistake kindness for weakness.


Autumn
A golden light plays everywhere
Showing us the path to our future
To happiness
To change
We grow older everyday
We adapt in a new way
We see things in a different view
Time goes by without us even knowing
So how can we describe autumn?
Peace
Comfort
Vulnerability
Is there an answer?
As we move forward in our lives


The author's comments:
Not one of my best work, but I still wanted to share it with you =)

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on Nov. 3 2012 at 5:18 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I read the first 3 lines and added it to my favorites. This is a beautiful poem!

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 8:25 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I liked your poem. Great job. Good message. Suggestion add a little bit of emotion.


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