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Pulling rain on my soul
Yanking fire,
Past you roll
Disconnect -are you there?
Where is that voice
Where is that face
I need your eyes
Sublime stare
Escape bolt, evade, or fly
Deny me just deny me
Can’t flee from your craze
Your fancy, urge, and hunger
Not a phase, does not fade- always stays
Urgency, running, your mind- stunning
Light flows bright pupils glare in night
It boils and it blurs there is a surge.
Loop, twist, coil-
Which one will be brave?
Unafraid, take a leap
Send a whirl spinning
Why so high?
Why so fierce?
No calm. No serene
Obsession of Pluto
Pulling this yearning, a longing of strain
Drain my fear- slow this rapid beat
Sweep me off my feet. Please?
I linger while you halt
I wait while you hold--
For trillions of seconds
You used to beckon.
Now the pure, I only can sense.
Only I
Broken dreams- shattered spirit, loss of self
Come down from that place in your head,
Outer space
Distance can be ripped
We may stretch we may reach
Need to touch need to feel- prickly cheeks
Zones of pain, stabbing aches
I sob, I shake
Empty time- alone
Rebirth, but respond
Do not cling, do not wail
I am openness. A trying attempt
Withhold none?
In the stars
Gifts of infinity
We are us, we will be
Engraved by a glimmering blade
Leave. Go. You always hide.
You duck and you bury
Suppress, mask, smuggle
Wish I was the devil.
Uncover, uncloak,
(Peer through nerdy glasses)
Force field of waterfalls
Feels so close
Imagination is doubt.
Go away, DOPE!
We are dead when apart
Cracks begin to show
I am calling
Shine heights. Dare to fly
Holes in your heart from tired joints
Sublime stares are water. Eyes are air
Truth in cores
Dig. Find.
You...through the dust
Imminent strings
Soiled crystal
We are a mirror.
Blushing red
Purple, pink

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iCheeto This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 9:52 pm
Whoa.  This is so good, you have such talent.  The topics and words and emotions flowed so perfectly, not just anyone can write a poem like this.  Keep writing, I can't wait to read more.  Usually poems like this don't catch my attention but you did and I loved it, awesome awesome job :D
GusMonster said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 2:29 pm
This is so.. incredible. The figurative language just speaks to me. What was your inspiration? 
Basya44 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 4:04 pm
Take a guess;)
Joshua. said...
Jun. 15, 2012 at 1:02 pm
This is really great! 
KutieBabyDoll said...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 10:06 pm
It is really great & descriptive I like your poem it made meh think bout my ex :) lol I give your poem 4 stars
Jules13 said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 12:18 pm
This is really great!!! I can tell you have an imaginative/creative side that when you let wild, can create inspiring pieces of work like this one!!!! Great Job and keep writing!!!!! said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 11:30 am
I.LOVE.THIS. this poem makes me think and it makes me have a rollercoaster of emotions! You set the mood perfectly! Your a really good poet!:)
Lizla This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 1:27 am
I like this a lot! I like how it jumps from a thought to another and touches on different things, yet is an entire piece when put together. Impressive!
Ricky628 said...
Jun. 7, 2012 at 8:01 pm
Simply beautiful. Love the structure and symbolism. You recently commented on my poem and Spsaid it was good, but I feel this one is much better. I love it
Basya44 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 6:45 pm
Monky, you seem cool. I feel like somebody finally understands my intentional mess of confusion. You should write something! And check out my other poem:)
monky99 said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 6:13 pm
I really like it! The symbolism is shown strongly throughout the peice. I like the random words also, its not completely one organized thought, which i like. :D
MadelynHope said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 5:14 pm
Interesting and again, very nice imagery. I advise you again to seperate stanzas, but otherwise very nice. Keep writing.
thatbywhchichwecallarose said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 5:08 pm
This is so interesting, I like it alot.
lshem said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 4:35 pm
Facinating!! i really admire it alot
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