May 21, 2012
It overwhelms me as I watch you
A want more than the want for you


It makes my heart ache and my head hurt
I refuse to give in
but maybe
maybe it would help
but then maybe it won't
the need hurts and I know the relief won't
maybe just once
but I know I won't be able to stop
and I will never let go of what we
had and what we don't anymore
I give in and as I watch you leave into the sunset as my lost hero I let go
As I watch a single tear slides down my face

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Sudsinthebucket said...
Jul. 23, 2013 at 1:23 pm
Thanks... to be honexst I don't even remember writing this... lol
Waistband said...
Jul. 17, 2013 at 1:22 am
See I like this kind of poetry. Its very well done and it conveys a very good message. But one thing that I think it needs, Just a little more oomf. LIke a little more emotion and detail and this poem would be absolutely amazing. You have it all there and you definitely have talent. :)
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