Maybe

May 21, 2012
By Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
5 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best and most beautiful things must be felt with the heart."








-Helen Keller


It overwhelms me as I watch you
go
A want more than the want for you

back





It makes my heart ache and my head hurt
I refuse to give in
but maybe
maybe it would help
but then maybe it won't
the need hurts and I know the relief won't
maybe just once
but I know I won't be able to stop
and I will never let go of what we
had and what we don't anymore
I give in and as I watch you leave into the sunset as my lost hero I let go
As I watch a single tear slides down my face



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on Jul. 23 2013 at 1:23 pm
Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
5 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best and most beautiful things must be felt with the heart."








-Helen Keller

Thanks... to be honexst I don't even remember writing this... lol

Waistband GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2013 at 1:22 am
Waistband GOLD, Hudson Falls, New York
15 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's right is what's left if you do everything else wrong." Robin Williams

See I like this kind of poetry. Its very well done and it conveys a very good message. But one thing that I think it needs, Just a little more oomf. LIke a little more emotion and detail and this poem would be absolutely amazing. You have it all there and you definitely have talent. :)


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