True Love's First Kiss

May 24, 2012
By AriannaNicole PLATINUM, Palmyra, Missouri
AriannaNicole PLATINUM, Palmyra, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
A #2 pencil and a dream can take you anywhere.
Joyce A. Myers


True loves first kiss. Happily ever after. All lost in a Cinderella story, shoved into a forgotten keepsake box. No more magic. No more fairy tales. Only the polluted streets of reality. Only the harsh winds of truth.


The author's comments:
I wrote this over a year ago, but I thought I would put it up and see what you guys thought!

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on Nov. 1 2012 at 4:07 pm
AriannaNicole PLATINUM, Palmyra, Missouri
49 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
A #2 pencil and a dream can take you anywhere.
Joyce A. Myers

Thank you. And good idea!! :) Appreciate the help!

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2012 at 2:39 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Mhm....i liked your title. I like your details and desricptions and imagery it was really good. The only thing i suggest is maybe add a proviking question or a hook at the end to make the readers be like WOW!!




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