True Love's First Kiss

May 24, 2012
True loves first kiss. Happily ever after. All lost in a Cinderella story, shoved into a forgotten keepsake box. No more magic. No more fairy tales. Only the polluted streets of reality. Only the harsh winds of truth.

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DanielM said...
Jun. 8, 2012 at 2:39 pm
Mhm....i liked your title. I like your details and desricptions and imagery it was really good. The only thing i suggest is maybe add a proviking question or a hook at the end to make the readers be like WOW!!
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Nov. 1, 2012 at 4:07 pm
Thank you. And good idea!! :) Appreciate the help!
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