It's You

May 26, 2012
By mjunior SILVER, Hacienda Heights, California
mjunior SILVER, Hacienda Heights, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. 5 It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. 6 Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. 7 It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

8 Love never fails. But where there are prophecies, they will cease; where there are tongues, they will be stilled; where there is knowledge, it will pass away.

Hey you, yeah you, want to know a secret....shh... I

think I like do like you, but do you like me?

Well how would you know if I liked you when I haven't told you. But

you don't know who you is. You could be the boy I go to school with or

you could be the boy I saw at the store last Wednesday. You could be anybody.

But you are not just anybody. You are all I can think about,

you are all I want to talk about. I haven't seen you but I long to,

I haven't met you in person but I plan to. I'll let you figure out who

you is and just maybe you do know that its you who I like.

And believe me you'll know it for you'll feel it inside.

The author's comments:
This poem is for a special someone who I like very much..........

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This article has 2 comments.

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2012 at 2:31 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Well i liked your poem and your tilte. I like the parital second person view. I like your detials and simpilicity. Only suggestion is your lines are a little bit spaced out to much. Other that i liked it.

on Jun. 7 2012 at 8:18 pm
JackieH PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
36 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't break character, you've got a lot of heart. ~ The Killers

Your grammer's a little messed up but good nonetheless.

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